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There are many animals on the world. But I'd like to tell you about my favourite one. it is wolf. I'm really admire for its beauty and grace. There are many kinds of wolves, which have differents in their appeance, for example in colour. But I'm like this animals not only by its appearance, I'm wonder for their intelligance and devotion to their pack. Once, I saw wolves's hunting on TV. It was emazing! I marvel their speed and endurance. They can silently stalk prey like a shadow.

If someone'll ask me whether I would like to become in the next life, I'll have chosen wolf.

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24 декабря, 12:03

Проверьте грамотность и предлоги, формулировку сочинения!

There are many animals on the world. But I'd like to tell you about my favourite one. it is wolf. I'm really admire for its beauty and grace. There are many kinds of wolves, which have differents in their appeance, for example in colour. But I'm like this animals not only by its appearance, I'm wonder for their intelligance and devotion to their pack. Once, I saw wolves's hunting on TV. It was emazing! I marvel their speed and endurance. They can silently stalk prey like a shadow.

If someone'll ask me whether I would like to become in the next life, I'll have chosen wolf.

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Любомир · Answer 1

В первом предложении in the world.

не differents, а differences.

не I'm like, а I like. и там же I wonder

опечатка intelligence

wolves'

скорее всего нужен артикль "a" тут - a prey

вроде после if нельзя will писать. тогда не will ask, а asks, хотя мне кажется вообще это предложение лучше переделать так:

If someone asks me who I would like to become in the next life, I'll chose a wolf.