Помогите с английским! Нужно сочинение на тему:"Мой визит в театр". У меня есть пробный вариант на русском, но его ещё нужно доработать. Вот он:

Прошлой зимой, моя семья и я ходили в театр. У нас были билеты на новогоднюю сказку "Снежная королева". Мы приехали в театр заранее. Мы оставили куртки в гардеробе и пошли в фойе. В фойе висели фотографии актеров и красивые картины. Затем мы купили программку у билетера. Наши места были близко к сцене на 6 ряду. мы сели на свои места и вдруг погас свет, шторы открылись и актёры вышли на сцену.

Он не готов, нужно ещё хотя 2 небольших абзаца.

Last winter I visited theatre with my parents. We saw a play called "princes of snow". It was very interesting play.

W had'n booked tickets in advence, so we bought tickets there. After buying tickets we went into the theatre. The hall of the theatre was full of the portraits of famous actor and actresses.

Then we got into the big room. There were stalls. We took our sits. Our sits were in the middle. Our row's number was 6. It was near the aisle.

We sat and waited for the performance. Suddenly the lights turned off and big curtain opened. It was wonderful!

Performance last 2 hours there was a little break after first hour.

When the play ended I was very happy! My family and I enjoyed too much. It was unforgotable.