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Dmitry Shebet is winner of the third season of the show-project dance on TNT. So he is notably fomous danser. But very few people know that his from is Kazakhstan. I am dancer, so I Watched this show. I wery like his motion pattern and his the ability to dance in different styles. I think Dmitry is worthy winner, but l don't think that l am his fan. l have the frend, who is danser too. He told that he was in Dmitrys Shebet master-class, when he was not a celebrity, but he knew his vacation. l heared to him with interest and l envied him.

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18 февраля, 21:47

помогите с английским, нужно конкретно отредактировать текст.

Dmitry Shebet is winner of the third season of the show-project dance on TNT. So he is notably fomous danser. But very few people know that his from is Kazakhstan. I am dancer, so I Watched this show. I wery like his motion pattern and his the ability to dance in different styles. I think Dmitry is worthy winner, but l don't think that l am his fan. l have the frend, who is danser too. He told that he was in Dmitrys Shebet master-class, when he was not a celebrity, but he knew his vacation. l heared to him with interest and l envied him.

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Дмитрий шебет победитель третьего сезона танцевального шоу продута на тнт. Поэтому он очень популярный танцор. Но только немногие знают что он из Казахстана. Я танцор тоже и я видел это шоу. Мне очень понравились его движения и способ танцевать в разных стилях но я не думаю что я его фанат. У меня есть друг который танцор тоже. Он мне сказал что был на мастеркласс Дмитрия шебетова но он знает (vacation отдых или вакансию?). Я послушал его с интересом и позавидовал ему